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« on: August 30, 2012, 10:16:31 pm Central Daylight Time » |
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This is something descriptive I wrote in response to something Tye said on FB. Just describing the consciousness traveling through the heart of a hurt and frozen soul.
"A frozen soul traveling aimlessly through the blizzard of never ending doubt. Wondering in a circle, right hand on a frozen wall for guidance, ever searching for a crack."
I just wrote it on the spot off the top of my head because of what Fever said i could Bring it into words that create a visual. I am always pulling inspiration from life, death, love and pain from what is happening around me.
Here is a response by BSA from the chat box.
"Why wander the frozen wastland of self doubt when you can channel your inner fire and blaze a new path for ones self using the fires of passion, confidence and trust fanned and kindled by those who you hold precious?Ignite the ambers of your courage and will of fire, that blaze will set you free."
True, true BSA but this writing was topical and revelvant to the moment and that current feeling. I just like the visual the writing creates.
Some people are experiencing the Frozen stage of the soul's cycle. "Hope is the real key to torture."
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« Reply #1 on: August 31, 2012, 12:13:56 am Central Daylight Time » |
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I thought it was good. Glad we saved it.
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« Reply #2 on: September 02, 2012, 04:37:36 pm Central Daylight Time » |
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Yea we should also post more random poetry here.
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« Reply #3 on: September 02, 2012, 06:01:51 pm Central Daylight Time » |
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I'll post my ocean one later. It's one I made in like 5 minutes.
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« Reply #4 on: September 02, 2012, 06:22:00 pm Central Daylight Time » |
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Cool.
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« Reply #5 on: September 14, 2012, 08:47:36 pm Central Daylight Time » |
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So, just post random poems? Let's see...
One's heart can not set me free, Your choices making it difficult for me to love you indefinably, So why try to start again if we shall not form properly? Oh, what has our love done to me?
One's mind cannot set me free, The logic has ended up only bashing our bond, The signals you're sending me is making us not seem fond, Oh, what is left of me?
Love has turned to hate and sent us free, Leaving bitter tastes to stay and for us to woe, Forcing unanswered questions to decay and grow, Oh, what have we forced us to be?
Sorry if it seemed a tad bit emo, I kinda wrote that over a year ago and never shared it.
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« Reply #6 on: September 15, 2012, 11:32:19 am Central Daylight Time » |
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Cool man thanks for sharing.
It has a rustic feel to it kinda old school.
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