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« on: April 27, 2013, 09:43:18 pm Central Daylight Time » |
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“Victim of the System” – By Tye Sussmann
Your recklessness had refueled my uncertainty When you took what was most precious to me Even the innocence of my baby’s eyes could see That this was no less than a tragedy
What could I do? I could do nothing Didn’t even get to say goodbye
Stunned in pain as I hit the floor hard in tears Never saw this coming in a million years It was there I lay abandoned in my own home Hard lessons learned about being alone
Walked out of my life Like it was nothing I was wrong to trust her
Goodbye my son We sure had something Even my very own name
Believe me! I could never forget the day She took it all away, she took you far away “Where's dad? I thought we were family” “Your dad, he had stay. He's very far away”
Rage and sorrow, all these feelings take over me Simultaneously with every image of you I see Even the good times roll in bad memories Like rare cancer, there’s no cure for this disease
Once again, picking up pieces of the past False promise, false hope of a united family The good things we need in life never last Like eyesight, throughout time it gets harder to see
You still don’t know what you do Your choices will haunt you
When you’re asleep I’m awake crying Feel like I failed you too
I think about you each and every day She took it all away, she took you far away No way, of knowing if you’re okay She took it all away, she took you far away
When he asks, then what will you say? You took him and ran away? Destroyed our family? “Hey mom? How come dad isn’t here with me?” “I don’t know what to say. He’s very far away”
This is part one of the story, pretty much. It's basically how I felt when I wasn't angry about losing contact with my son. All this was new to me so it felt very appropriate to write out my feelings this way.
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« Reply #1 on: April 28, 2013, 11:56:26 am Central Daylight Time » |
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« Reply #2 on: May 15, 2013, 10:55:20 pm Central Daylight Time » |
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Thanks for the many words of support.
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« Reply #3 on: May 22, 2013, 11:45:16 am Central Daylight Time » |
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This is so sad. Hella hard to read.
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« Reply #4 on: May 22, 2013, 12:09:22 pm Central Daylight Time » |
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mhmm... Don't know what to say.
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« Reply #5 on: May 22, 2013, 09:17:09 pm Central Daylight Time » |
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That Imma fvckin b!tch.
Seriously that's fvcked up yo.
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« Reply #6 on: May 22, 2013, 09:18:32 pm Central Daylight Time » |
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Yahahahahahahaha or is it hahahahahahahaha my laughter of craziness well the poem gave a funny feeling the kind story that gave me further thoughts of the world the beautiful yet cruel times times many have suffered greatly while other suffered delusions of their own suffering we cannot see with yourself we are always blind to things that are true to front and backs of the world this is half i give in reply of your poem been awhile since i been set this mood sigh i always hate this mood gives me tears when ever i have a single entity of the thought the death that always linger in ways more then one this mood has always corrected my way of thinking now hate the single thought though reasons is hypocrisy i have thought in my mind and now ill stop seems i have said too much ill go bck too deep slumber once more this thoughts of mine for its the thoughts of hypocrisy, sadness, anger, and a touch of the worlds feelings. and woah thats way too long sorry of this reply and keep on living
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« Reply #7 on: May 22, 2013, 11:34:47 pm Central Daylight Time » |
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It's how I felt though. If I write something about me, writing is the way I leave the feelings of the past stuck in the words I wrote.
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« Reply #8 on: May 23, 2013, 02:32:39 pm Central Daylight Time » |
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What just happened?
And that is the longest run on sentence I've ever seen.
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« Reply #9 on: May 23, 2013, 02:59:46 pm Central Daylight Time » |
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